HippieGhost
10-12-2009, 10:04 PM
I'm writing the tales again so I'll post what iI have so far first. enjoy:
Prologue
The sun had just begun to rise on Telas village. The province of Solene, located on the southern tip of the continent, had always been a peaceful place. The towns remained small, and rarely did any strangers arrive unless it was on important business. This extended even to Solene City, which acted as the capital as it's name suggested. The majority of those who lived in this quaint country were often farmers or hunters, but the port city of Sarcport had seen it's fair share of sailors as well. However, this story does not take place in either of this cities. As the name of this chapter suggests, this story begins in Telas Village, a small town located by an old forest. Many of you are wondering why I am allowing this story to be clichéd in this way, others are wondering why I am digressing from the topic. I will answer both of these questions before we move on.
To answer the second question first, I am digressing from the story for a moment to warn you of something that you may not enjoy. This information comes with the answer to the first question. You see, our world is full of stories about brave knights who leave their tiny villages and return as heroes who have slain dragons and rescued "damsels in distress". It is full of stories of children who grow up to seek justice for unjust actions. It is full of stories with happy endings and morals and friendship.
This, to your dismay... is no such story.
Chapter 1
Telas
A few miles north of Telas village....
Feren, a young 11-year-old stood outside of the cave with his younger brother, Fendir (age 7). Their mother had left late the night before in a carriage bound for Solene city. After the disappearance of Delven, Feren's father two years ago, his mother Banalra had to find a way to support the family. She did this by going to Solene city and working for in the local shops each week. During this time, Feren would usually be under the watchful eye of the other locals, and would play with his friends, Arla and Elra, who also hapened to be twins. The two girls never quite saw eye to eye for some reason, and would always have different ways of doing things. Arla always seemed to want to learn magic like her father, and aspired to become a mage and learn spells all her life; while Elra had always been more realistic in her goals, and would often try to perform magic without the need for spells. Amongst the other children was Borsken, Feren's cousin, who always tried to take control of the others; and Veldrin Earratak, who kept to himself often. Feren always felt strange around Veldrin, as if he sensed a dark presence inside of him. The silver-haired young boy always seemed to be studying strange magic’s, and would never attempt to get along with the others. As a result the parents kept their distance from him.
Feren stared deep into the dark, depressing cave. The air inside was damp, and smelled of decomposition. Fendir hid behind him, afraid to continue, but Feren turned to him and said, "Come on Fendir, it's only goblins. Our dad used to kill these guys all the time!"
"But we're only little kids! We can't take on a goblin cave by ourselves! What if we die?!"
"If we die, we'll take as many of these things with us as we can. Besides, it's not like we're going to actually charge in and try to kill them all."
"We're not?" Fendir had always assumed that the best approach to battle was to rush in quickly.
"Nope, we're going to sneak in, steal their stuff, and maybe kill the leader."
"kill the leader?! that sounds awesome!" Fendir's eyes lit up at the sound of this. They would be heroes to the town if this worked.
"Come on, enough talk. let's go, and stay low." Feren finished.
The brothers slowly entered the cave, staying low to avoid being spotted as they went further and further down towards the goblin encampment. As they approached, they noticed a dim light in the distance; probably from a fire. Fendir quickly tried to run ahead upon the sighting, and Feren quickly grabbed his collar, pulling him back. "No, that's too risky, we're going this way." he said, leading Fendir down a dark tunnel on the right side of the path. the tunnel wound around the "main hall” of the goblins, and into a large den. It was there that they spotted a small heap of treasure coming from the goblin raids. Nearby, a large goblin sat in a Chantilly made throne, Feren quickly surmised that this was the leader. Silently, stealth fully, Feren lightly stepped towards the treasures, and began quietly sorting through it. There were a number of small bags of gold, and quite a few books and pieces of merchandise taken from caravans that were trying to get to Solene city. It was one of these items in particular that caught Feren's eye. This item was a small book that bore a magic-looking seal on it's cover. Feren's mother carried it with him at all times.
Suddenly and epiphany overcame Feren as he glanced at a pile of bodies to the side. One of these bodies, though starting to decompose, was instantly recognized as that of Banalra, his mother. The goblins must have attacked at night while they were asleep, because Banalra had been known for being the only female warrior around during the entrathian wars. Delven, ferens father, was the leader of an army of powerful elves during this time, and had met Banalra, a human, in the midst of battle when she saved his life from her own allies. Now, they were both gone. Delven had disappeared, and Banalra was now dead. An inner rage began to overcome Feren as tears welled up in his eyes. He unhesitantly drew the short sword he had stolen from his house earlier that day and charged straight towards the goblin leader. The creature screeched in surprised, and quickly drew it's weapon, a dark, glowing dagger. Before Fendir knew what was happening the two collided. Feren had lunged upwards, unseaming the goblin king; but the creature had gotten as chance before it's downfall to drive the dagger up Feren's face, cutting it from his left eye in a zigzag pattern down to his right cheek. Both the goblin and Feren dropped to the ground. Feren was still breathing, thankfully, but something was wrong. the dagger wound was doing something to him, and had completely paralyzed him for the moment. Fendir quickly ran up to his brother and dragged him into the shadows. He couldn't have done so at a better time, as the shriek of goblins began to fill the caves. It was quite clear now that their presence had been compromised.
Fendir tried with all of his might to lift his older brother. Being a half-elf, the two were naturally lighter than other races, but even then, Fendir's scrawny muscles would not lift Feren. Quickly Fendir looked around and noticed a small hand cart; perfect. Acting without hesitation, young child grabbed the cart and wheeled it over to his injured brother, who had begun shaking now. The loud clangor of the enraged goblins increased, signifying that they were on their way, and small lights began to appear in the cave distance. Fendir hastily dragged Feren onto the cart and began sprinting down the tunnel in the direction of the exit, his short golden hair now turning bronze with sweat, only to see to his dismay 2 rather large goblins standing guard ahead. Avoiding their line of sight, Fendir moved the cart behind a rock, unintentionally banging it against the wall. On of the guards perked up upon hearing the noise, and slowly began sneaking towards the half-elven brothers.
Feren let out a slight gasp as he tried to hand Fendir a small dagger. Grabbing it, Fendir realized that this way the same dagger that the goblin leader had! The goblin's footsteps could be heard somewhat clearly now, and Fendir crouched, ready to spring on the fearsome creature like a tiger on unsuspecting prey. Just as the goblins head appeared above the boulder Fendir lunged at the creature with the dagger and imbedded the weapon deep in it's temple. It let out a writhing scream of pain that alerted the entire cave once more, and the other guard quickly began running towards them. Fendir had only one option now, he quickly took the wheel of the cart and began sprinting straight at the vile guard, ramming it at top speed. The goblin fell back upon impact with the cart, and Fendir rushed out of the cave as fast as his legs could carry him.
The air began to feel cold in his breath now, and he knew he couldn't go much further. Feren was beginning to shake further, and his eyes began to glow a dark red. Persistently, Fendir picked dup his pace, a bad move, and lost his footing on the ground. He tripped, releasing the cart, which proceeded to ram itself into a small bush. As Fendir sprawled across the ground, he gasped for air and looked down at his arms and legs. the were now blood from the fall, and a sharp stick was jutting out of his leg. His vision blurred as he looked back towards the cave. Goblins were now pouring out of the exit and headed straight for him. the last thing Fendir saw was a flash of blue sparks before he lost consciousness.
"Can you hear me? Just nod if you can.... good. okay, just a little shock. Whoa! Easy there, this is going to help you. It's not easy trying to reverse this kind of hex."
"Sir, is he going to be okay?"
"He will survive yes... but the boy you knew is long dead. The magic from that dagger, Orneck, changed him."
"What do you mean?"
"There is darkness in him now. It's lucky that I found you when I did. Another few moments and your brother... well... let's just say your brother would be much worse off than he is now. I can stop the magic from spreading to him completely, but unfortunately he will ever be the same. Here, have him drink this."
Prologue
The sun had just begun to rise on Telas village. The province of Solene, located on the southern tip of the continent, had always been a peaceful place. The towns remained small, and rarely did any strangers arrive unless it was on important business. This extended even to Solene City, which acted as the capital as it's name suggested. The majority of those who lived in this quaint country were often farmers or hunters, but the port city of Sarcport had seen it's fair share of sailors as well. However, this story does not take place in either of this cities. As the name of this chapter suggests, this story begins in Telas Village, a small town located by an old forest. Many of you are wondering why I am allowing this story to be clichéd in this way, others are wondering why I am digressing from the topic. I will answer both of these questions before we move on.
To answer the second question first, I am digressing from the story for a moment to warn you of something that you may not enjoy. This information comes with the answer to the first question. You see, our world is full of stories about brave knights who leave their tiny villages and return as heroes who have slain dragons and rescued "damsels in distress". It is full of stories of children who grow up to seek justice for unjust actions. It is full of stories with happy endings and morals and friendship.
This, to your dismay... is no such story.
Chapter 1
Telas
A few miles north of Telas village....
Feren, a young 11-year-old stood outside of the cave with his younger brother, Fendir (age 7). Their mother had left late the night before in a carriage bound for Solene city. After the disappearance of Delven, Feren's father two years ago, his mother Banalra had to find a way to support the family. She did this by going to Solene city and working for in the local shops each week. During this time, Feren would usually be under the watchful eye of the other locals, and would play with his friends, Arla and Elra, who also hapened to be twins. The two girls never quite saw eye to eye for some reason, and would always have different ways of doing things. Arla always seemed to want to learn magic like her father, and aspired to become a mage and learn spells all her life; while Elra had always been more realistic in her goals, and would often try to perform magic without the need for spells. Amongst the other children was Borsken, Feren's cousin, who always tried to take control of the others; and Veldrin Earratak, who kept to himself often. Feren always felt strange around Veldrin, as if he sensed a dark presence inside of him. The silver-haired young boy always seemed to be studying strange magic’s, and would never attempt to get along with the others. As a result the parents kept their distance from him.
Feren stared deep into the dark, depressing cave. The air inside was damp, and smelled of decomposition. Fendir hid behind him, afraid to continue, but Feren turned to him and said, "Come on Fendir, it's only goblins. Our dad used to kill these guys all the time!"
"But we're only little kids! We can't take on a goblin cave by ourselves! What if we die?!"
"If we die, we'll take as many of these things with us as we can. Besides, it's not like we're going to actually charge in and try to kill them all."
"We're not?" Fendir had always assumed that the best approach to battle was to rush in quickly.
"Nope, we're going to sneak in, steal their stuff, and maybe kill the leader."
"kill the leader?! that sounds awesome!" Fendir's eyes lit up at the sound of this. They would be heroes to the town if this worked.
"Come on, enough talk. let's go, and stay low." Feren finished.
The brothers slowly entered the cave, staying low to avoid being spotted as they went further and further down towards the goblin encampment. As they approached, they noticed a dim light in the distance; probably from a fire. Fendir quickly tried to run ahead upon the sighting, and Feren quickly grabbed his collar, pulling him back. "No, that's too risky, we're going this way." he said, leading Fendir down a dark tunnel on the right side of the path. the tunnel wound around the "main hall” of the goblins, and into a large den. It was there that they spotted a small heap of treasure coming from the goblin raids. Nearby, a large goblin sat in a Chantilly made throne, Feren quickly surmised that this was the leader. Silently, stealth fully, Feren lightly stepped towards the treasures, and began quietly sorting through it. There were a number of small bags of gold, and quite a few books and pieces of merchandise taken from caravans that were trying to get to Solene city. It was one of these items in particular that caught Feren's eye. This item was a small book that bore a magic-looking seal on it's cover. Feren's mother carried it with him at all times.
Suddenly and epiphany overcame Feren as he glanced at a pile of bodies to the side. One of these bodies, though starting to decompose, was instantly recognized as that of Banalra, his mother. The goblins must have attacked at night while they were asleep, because Banalra had been known for being the only female warrior around during the entrathian wars. Delven, ferens father, was the leader of an army of powerful elves during this time, and had met Banalra, a human, in the midst of battle when she saved his life from her own allies. Now, they were both gone. Delven had disappeared, and Banalra was now dead. An inner rage began to overcome Feren as tears welled up in his eyes. He unhesitantly drew the short sword he had stolen from his house earlier that day and charged straight towards the goblin leader. The creature screeched in surprised, and quickly drew it's weapon, a dark, glowing dagger. Before Fendir knew what was happening the two collided. Feren had lunged upwards, unseaming the goblin king; but the creature had gotten as chance before it's downfall to drive the dagger up Feren's face, cutting it from his left eye in a zigzag pattern down to his right cheek. Both the goblin and Feren dropped to the ground. Feren was still breathing, thankfully, but something was wrong. the dagger wound was doing something to him, and had completely paralyzed him for the moment. Fendir quickly ran up to his brother and dragged him into the shadows. He couldn't have done so at a better time, as the shriek of goblins began to fill the caves. It was quite clear now that their presence had been compromised.
Fendir tried with all of his might to lift his older brother. Being a half-elf, the two were naturally lighter than other races, but even then, Fendir's scrawny muscles would not lift Feren. Quickly Fendir looked around and noticed a small hand cart; perfect. Acting without hesitation, young child grabbed the cart and wheeled it over to his injured brother, who had begun shaking now. The loud clangor of the enraged goblins increased, signifying that they were on their way, and small lights began to appear in the cave distance. Fendir hastily dragged Feren onto the cart and began sprinting down the tunnel in the direction of the exit, his short golden hair now turning bronze with sweat, only to see to his dismay 2 rather large goblins standing guard ahead. Avoiding their line of sight, Fendir moved the cart behind a rock, unintentionally banging it against the wall. On of the guards perked up upon hearing the noise, and slowly began sneaking towards the half-elven brothers.
Feren let out a slight gasp as he tried to hand Fendir a small dagger. Grabbing it, Fendir realized that this way the same dagger that the goblin leader had! The goblin's footsteps could be heard somewhat clearly now, and Fendir crouched, ready to spring on the fearsome creature like a tiger on unsuspecting prey. Just as the goblins head appeared above the boulder Fendir lunged at the creature with the dagger and imbedded the weapon deep in it's temple. It let out a writhing scream of pain that alerted the entire cave once more, and the other guard quickly began running towards them. Fendir had only one option now, he quickly took the wheel of the cart and began sprinting straight at the vile guard, ramming it at top speed. The goblin fell back upon impact with the cart, and Fendir rushed out of the cave as fast as his legs could carry him.
The air began to feel cold in his breath now, and he knew he couldn't go much further. Feren was beginning to shake further, and his eyes began to glow a dark red. Persistently, Fendir picked dup his pace, a bad move, and lost his footing on the ground. He tripped, releasing the cart, which proceeded to ram itself into a small bush. As Fendir sprawled across the ground, he gasped for air and looked down at his arms and legs. the were now blood from the fall, and a sharp stick was jutting out of his leg. His vision blurred as he looked back towards the cave. Goblins were now pouring out of the exit and headed straight for him. the last thing Fendir saw was a flash of blue sparks before he lost consciousness.
"Can you hear me? Just nod if you can.... good. okay, just a little shock. Whoa! Easy there, this is going to help you. It's not easy trying to reverse this kind of hex."
"Sir, is he going to be okay?"
"He will survive yes... but the boy you knew is long dead. The magic from that dagger, Orneck, changed him."
"What do you mean?"
"There is darkness in him now. It's lucky that I found you when I did. Another few moments and your brother... well... let's just say your brother would be much worse off than he is now. I can stop the magic from spreading to him completely, but unfortunately he will ever be the same. Here, have him drink this."